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I want to live a life without fear that’s quite the opposite of the life I’ve got here I keep trying to make you understand but you won’t see I am lost in your land I keep thinking of where you can be and I can’t stop hoping that someday you’ll see I search the heaven and the deepth of my heart but no matter where I look, there’s missing a part Where are you now and why can’t you see that you are the part that is missing of me Look at me as I looked at you say that you love me, I hope you do Say I’m your hope, your life and your dream ‘cause my love for you won’t end as it seem look into my eyes and read my mind and maybe, just maybe, someday you’ll find The key to the locker in the deep of my heart and open it up, it would be a start Then you would meet the real side of me the one I truly am, or ought to be You would be shocked, I know that you would but would you then, or still, love me? I don’t think you could | ||||||||||||||
 | haleløs | 2011-06-06 07:14:08 |
Jeg har læst dit hjertegribende, tankevækkende digt, og har egentlig ingen kommentarer, lige bortsét fra, hvorvidt du i 3. sidste verselinie faktisk mener 'choked'='kvalt' eller 'en tudse i halsen' (som skrevet) ... eller 'shocked'='chokeret' ?
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| Dragonfly | 2011-06-06 11:06:07 |
tak fordi du påpegde det :i det var 'shocked' jeg mente x)
| Nadia K | 2011-06-06 09:38:58 |
Jeg elsker det her digt!
-især begyndelsen "I want to live a life without fear, that’s quite the opposite of the life I’ve got here" :)
-især begyndelsen "I want to live a life without fear, that’s quite the opposite of the life I’ve got here" :)
| haleløs | 2012-01-24 07:42:37 |
i fald grammatikken har din interesse faldt jeg liiige over disse småting:
4. strofes 2. verselinie 'as it seemS'
2. strofes 3. verselinie 'the deepTH of my heart'
5. strofes 1. verselinie 'in the deep of my heart' enten ' in the depTH of ...' eller 'deep in my heart'
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4. strofes 2. verselinie 'as it seemS'
2. strofes 3. verselinie 'the deepTH of my heart'
5. strofes 1. verselinie 'in the deep of my heart' enten ' in the depTH of ...' eller 'deep in my heart'
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