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He's wearing the mask the mask wears him tears him becomes him tells a different story of him than what is him truly now where is he? Is it the mirror that lies? his own eyes? identity becomes polluted changes to become what might be more suited She paints a selfportrait correct as she ought to be fought to be was taught to be but who would she be really now where is she? Is it the mirror that lies? her own eyes? identity becomes polluted changes to become what might be more suited | ||||||||||||||
 | Lau G.N. | 2012-08-21 00:36:48 |
wauv lyder som det jeg går gennem i mit hoved lige nu..
fantastisk digt og dejligt at læse noget mere fra dig :D
elsker første strofe,
"He's wearing the mask
the mask wears him
tears him
becomes him"
smukt og velfortalt portræt af et overtagende alterego
Hilsen
Natteravnen
fantastisk digt og dejligt at læse noget mere fra dig :D
elsker første strofe,
"He's wearing the mask
the mask wears him
tears him
becomes him"
smukt og velfortalt portræt af et overtagende alterego
Hilsen
Natteravnen
| Ester Jensen | 2012-09-02 21:29:04 |
Virkelig godt skrevet!!
She paints a selfportrait
correct as she ought to be
fought to be
was taught to be
Wow - de linjer er altså ret fede og kreative (hvis man kan sige det sådan - det er selvfølgelig positivt ment!)
She paints a selfportrait
correct as she ought to be
fought to be
was taught to be
Wow - de linjer er altså ret fede og kreative (hvis man kan sige det sådan - det er selvfølgelig positivt ment!)
| RockyGal | 2012-09-03 14:47:19 |
Det lyder positivt ment, tak for det :)
| haleløs | 2012-09-03 15:59:02 |
Et særdeles veldigtet, flertydigt portræt; (he + she) kunne jo udmærket være blot een person, som er usikker på / leger med sin seksuelle orientering 'identity becomes polluted / changes to become what / might be more suited' såvel som en mand/dreng el. kvinde/pige som har vanskeligt ved at 'forstå' sin sociale rolle ? se 'Chilsen's Korset (færdig)
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Glad for du kan lide det. Det bliver godt nok ikke til meget skriven for tiden
men man går jo aldrig helt i stå :)